oficina / meet Public

copy: slice 1 strings approved by Paul

Two edits applied verbatim from the copy review: the sign-in sent
notice and the holding page's placeholder sentence. The copy list
records the approval.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5.1 <noreply@anthropic.com>

Paul Campbell pushed by paul@keymail.dev 1 month ago cae60eddefa4a4966e3064efe978c84d57f2fbb0 parent 92728a8

3 files changed, +5 −6

docs/superpowers/copy/2026-09-08-slice-1-strings.md +3 −4
internal/meet/templates/join.html +1 −1
internal/meet/templates/signin.html +1 −1

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diff --git a/docs/superpowers/copy/2026-09-08-slice-1-strings.md b/docs/superpowers/copy/2026-09-08-slice-1-strings.md

index b5c2373..449d43f 100644

--- a/docs/superpowers/copy/2026-09-08-slice-1-strings.md

+++ b/docs/superpowers/copy/2026-09-08-slice-1-strings.md

@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@

# Slice 1 copy list

-Drafts, pending copy review per spec §10; the review is one sitting

-for the slice before merge.

+Reviewed and approved by Paul on 2026-09-08 (copy-review, 52 strings, two edited). The strings below are the approved text.

## Sign in (`/signin`)

@@ -9,7 +8,7 @@ for the slice before merge.

| --- | --- |

| Sign in | `templates/signin.html`, `title` block |

| Sign in to Meet | `templates/signin.html`, `content` block, page-header Title |

-| If that address can sign in here, a link is on its way. Open it on this device to continue. | `templates/signin.html`, `content` block, sent notice |

+| A sign in link should be on its way with a link to click. | `templates/signin.html`, `content` block, sent notice |

| Email address | `templates/signin.html`, `content` block, field Label |

| Send me a sign-in link | `templates/signin.html`, `content` block, submit button |

| That does not look like an email address. | `auth.go`, `signin` (`err=address`) |

@@ -90,7 +89,7 @@ for the slice before merge.

| Starts {{.Starts}}. | `templates/join.html`, `content` block (when the meeting has a start time) |

| You are {{.Name}}, joining as a {{.Standing}}. | `templates/join.html`, `content` block (`{{.Standing}}` is "member" or "guest", from `standing.go`, `Standing.String`) |

| This team's Meet has no relay yet. Calls usually connect only between people on the same network. | `templates/join.html`, `content` block (the floor notice; shown only when no relay is configured) |

-| The call itself is the next slice of this app. When it lands, this page will show your camera preview, device pickers and a join button, and needs JavaScript for that part only; everything else here works without it. | `templates/join.html`, `content` block |

+| Calls coming soon | `templates/join.html`, `content` block |

| End the meeting | `templates/join.html`, `content` block, member-only link |

## Error page (`/errors`, and any handler's `ErrorPage`)

diff --git a/internal/meet/templates/join.html b/internal/meet/templates/join.html

index ad0872e..cd759b6 100644

--- a/internal/meet/templates/join.html

+++ b/internal/meet/templates/join.html

@@ -5,6 +5,6 @@

{{if .Starts}}Starts {{.Starts}}.{{end}}

You are {{.Name}}, joining as a {{.Standing}}.

{{if .Floor}}This team's Meet has no relay yet. Calls usually connect only between people on the same network.{{end}}

-The call itself is the next slice of this app. When it lands, this page will show your camera preview, device pickers and a join button, and needs JavaScript for that part only; everything else here works without it.

+Calls coming soon

{{if .IsMember}}<a href="/meetings/{{.Sqid}}/end">End the meeting</a>{{end}}

diff --git a/internal/meet/templates/signin.html b/internal/meet/templates/signin.html

index 2388d88..337d45f 100644

--- a/internal/meet/templates/signin.html

+++ b/internal/meet/templates/signin.html

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@

-If that address can sign in here, a link is on its way. Open it on this device to continue.

+A sign in link should be on its way with a link to click.

{{if .Error}}{{.Error}}{{end}}